Sunday, February 27, 2011

Non duality

If words could suffice,epics would have been constructed
but they wouldn't ,so, they are not
so sense this,once and for all,the ultimate truth
I AM

Look for me,in you
search for me,inside your soul
Find me residing in your heart
I AM

Period.

2 comments:

  1. The way you begin the poem is commendable. However, beyond the opening the poem vanishes off with no traces whatsoever of the moxie which possessed the opening two lines which to my pleasant surprise were great, even logically comprehensible.. prophetic too. But the poem went off-key for me (or was it my mind>) with your no longer subtle i-am-talking-like-a-prophet mannerism.

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  2. well,the whole point of the rhetorical device,in this case -repetition,was to lay emphasis on that itself..the poem relates to a very spiritual concept(Advaita)...so it was contextual...but yes,i realise it was a little weak in content..will work on it!

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